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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Dark >> ID #1727467  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
The Journey
Poem about depression
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(snow journey written angels music dark clouds)

Opening at her feet, a deep black hole
snow-filled, and beyond a grassy knoll

Not surprised, she realised, shed
seen said hole a fair few times,

shakely she leaned, it had no bottom
on nearby rock it was written
there are no angels, no music from the clouds

things looked dark, but she didnt cry
she took her pills and dryed her eyes.
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