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Color My World
A double nonet ~ Honorable Mention in Color My World Contest
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Color My World

Color my world gray, for depression
has me in its grasp and will not
loosen its grip. I struggle
to see
brilliant colors
beyond the
gray mist.
The colorful
images
remain
as
a
hazy
memory,
ever taunting
me to burst through the

ominous darkness that
hovers all around my world,
clouding my judgment, blinding me
to the
rainbow just beyond the mist.



Pat Nelson
December 7, 2010


A Nonet is a poem with nine lines. Line one has nine syllables, line two has eight syllables, and on like that until the ninth line, which is only one syllable.

A Double Nonet reverses the order in the second verse.

Rhyming is not necessary. The main emphasis should be on imagery and the flow of the thoughts throughout the poem.
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