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Crux
The pain of departing ... (Form: Minute Poetry) |
Crux![]() Sensual curves gleam in the light. They fill my sight with your soft glow and yet ... I go. Your beauty rides upon your skin. Nothing's within. You're carved from ice. It won't suffice. With bags in hand, I close the door. I need much more. I won't enshrine your cold design. I turn from you to dark's embrace. My only trace soon disappears with drying tears. Notes Written for January 8 in a "A Poem A Day Contest " Form: Minute Poetry is a poem of 4-line stanzas with a rhyme pattern of aabb. The syllable counts for each line are: 8, 4, 4, 4 – and that is repeated for each stanza. The meter here is iambic, meaning that the poem has a pattern of unstressed and stressed syllables. crux - something that torments by its puzzling nature Thank you for taking time to read my words. I would appreciate it if you took a moment and left a comment. Your reaction, impressions, criticisms, - yes, even praise |