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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1738822  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
A Love So True
"In this fathomless, helter-skelter world,/Sharing joyous warmth..." - a poem.
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Basking in the beauty and magnificence
Of the picturesque evening glow,
We hold hands and watch the jubilant sun setting
In the orange, crimson sky;
Two appreciative lovers who’ve partnered together
In this fathomless, helter-skelter world,
Sharing joyous warmth during the chilly,
But gorgeous scene.
In our plans, a wondrous evening of fun and relaxation,
Then bedtime, in our cozy, hospitable homes.
As the temperature drops even further,
We stare joyously at the pure and radiant aura
Shimmering right before our awestruck eyes,
Reaffirming our undying love for one another,
At peace, during the tranquility of early nightfall…

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