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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1744062  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
20 Years Older / Birthday Blues
Just a short poem I made up.
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20 years older and I feel brand new

I'll probably feel the same when 21 is due

But baby you know that I got a devil mind

And I love you gal because you treat me so unkind



Aw honey, I want you so bad

My heads exploding it's driving me mad

But I know I'll be safe back here

As long as you can pass me the last beer



Smoke some creativity, relax for a while

Come sit here with me, I wanna feel your smile

You know I'm good to you, you know its alright

And I just wanna stay here with you all night



You are my baby, and I love you so

Just wanna tell you that, before you go.





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