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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Other >> ID #1756743  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
The Breakdown
A poem about depression.
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Avg Rating: (5)
I’m feeling sad

Slightly depressed

The smallest thing

May push me over the edge

Most people don’t see it

Until its to late

When I’ve snapped

My temper changed

Then they see me as a threat

But that’s not me

And some people see

That something is wrong

And offer their help

To pull me through

And make me strong

They believe in me
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