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Chapter 16
Lise talks to Annie about JD11 and the tank. Annie gets her gun.
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Artifact Man 
A thriller, new age, sci-fi novel about a strange man found in the desert.
by Hyperiongate

ID: 1767540   (Rated: E)
Chapter 15 
The Brotherhood, an assassin and a senator enter the picture.
by Hyperiongate


6:40 am, Monday, March 23rd
Renown Medical Center, Reno, Nevada


Lise waited for Annie to finish her shift. She’d asked the young woman to stop by her office as soon as she was relieved. Yesterday morning’s comment from Annie had caught Lise of guard. At the time, Lise had let the comment go by as if Annie had just been kidding; all the while knowing she was not. Annie really believed that she was in communication with the man in the tank; a preposterous idea in the absence of any other symptoms. Symptoms like a comatose man with an awake brain “listening” to a woman reading silently next to him.

This was starting to get a little spooky. She’d confided in Jack who’d tried to be supportive; but she could see that he had his doubts. Maybe the hand had floated over to the edge of the tank. Maybe Annie was kidding. And finally, maybe he should call the colonel.

They agreed that first she would confront Annie with her concerns. If it turned out that Annie was in touch with JD11, the colonel would have to be called. There was simply no way to medically explain such a phenomena. They would have to bring in the expert at dealing with such “out of the box” type events.

Annie arrived right on time and took the offered seat. Lise went straight to the heart of the matter.

“Annie, what do you mean that JD11 wanted to thank me? How can you know what he wants?” Lise glanced down at printout indicating that JD11 had, in fact, biologically ramped up during the time Annie had been reading to him.

“I’m not sure Dr. Marshall. It’s not like he talks to me or anything. It feels like I just know what he wants me to know. Does that make any sense to you?”

Lise could see that Annie was genuinely trying to make herself understood. “Is it like you are hearing voices in your head? Maybe you nodded off while you were reading to him and you dreamt that you talked to him.”

“No, I never sleep during my shift. And no, I am not hearing voices. Let me see if I can explain.” Annie thought for a moment before continuing, “Imagine that out there, somewhere in the universe, there is this idea about something. It is just there waiting for you to come across it. It is meant for you alone. Then, one day, you and this thought come together. The time and space that you both share is as one. When this happens, it becomes part of you. That is what this feels like. I just know something that I didn’t know earlier.”

Lise watched the young woman as she was talking. Annie clearly believed everything she was saying. Even now, she sat calmly, looking at Lise as if she had not just explained how the universe worked.

“Annie …”

“Dr. Marshall,” Annie interrupted, “JD11 says it will be time to take him out of the tank one week from today.”

Lise sat back in her chair. Was this nursing assistant really trying to tell her how to do her job? No, that wasn’t it. It felt more like she was just relaying a message she believed to be from JD11.

“Annie, I’ll take him out when I think it’s time to take him out and not before. I don’t care what you think he is telling you. The Immersion technology has succeeded beyond our wildest expectation. Still, there is no way he will be physically ready to come out for at least another six weeks.”

Annie said nothing. She sat and smiled as Lise told her “No.” It was as if what Lise said didn’t matter at all.

“Annie, do you understand what I am telling you?”

“Yes, Doctor, I understand. Still, he will be out of the tank one week from today. I don’t know how or why, but it will happen. It must happen.”

Lise thought that last bit sounded more like a threat than anything else. “What do you mean it must happen?”

Annie closed her eyes for a minute. Lise couldn’t tell if she was trying to remember, but for some reason, it looked like Annie was listening.

“He said to tell you there is danger coming this way. He cannot be in the tank when it gets here. The probability of his survival drops to near zero if he is in the tank one week from today.”

After that, Annie had little more to say. She apparently didn’t understand the meaning of her words any more than Lise did. It was as if the girl was just a messenger.

Lise sent Annie home and then spent the next hour or so thinking about the woman’s comments. It would have been easy to dismiss the girl’s comments as delusional. If Lise truly believed that to be the case, she should have Annie relieved immediately. However, suppose she really was communicating with JD11. Suppose everything she said was true. What would that mean? Did she really need to take him out of the tank in just one more week? How could he, as a patient, know this? He was healing at a miraculous rate but could it be that JD11 was that far along?

Lise decided to run the idea by her team at their daily briefing. However, she’d keep Annie’s comments to herself for the time being. In the meantime, she decided to drop by and take a look at JD11 herself, up close.

He floated in the middle of a glass tank. Wires connected all of his vitals to readouts in the observation booth. Pumps kept the gel-like fluid oxygenated and nutrient enriched. There was no visible sign that he was anything other than sound asleep.

Lise scanned him from head to toe. Most of his skin had grown back but was still a translucent pink. His eye lids had grown back which was a relief to most of those that worked with him. It had been more than a little disturbing to work around him when his eyes were exposed and appeared to be watching their every move.

Other body parts had grown back as well; including many that were considered to be gone for good. A week ago, he’d been missing an ear, part of his nose and three fingers. All were in the early stages of reformation. There was even hair growing back. Apparently he was a blonde.

Lise looked around, making sure she was alone. She then reached out and touched the side of the tank.

“Are you awake in there?” she asked out loud.

“I need to know what’s going on. If you can hear me, you need to find a way to tell me. I can’t have a crazy girl in here looking after you. So if you want her to stay, you’d better let me know right now.”

Nothing.

After a minute, Lise dropped her hand. She was being silly thinking that JD11 was going to pop his head out of the top of the tank and explain everything to her.

Lise turned to leave. As she walked towards the door, she was struck by a thought. It was as if she’d walked through a time and place where that thought had been waiting an eternity for her. She didn’t hear anything. But she knew and instantly understood.

The thought: “Lise, Annie must stay with me.”

She spun, half-hoping to catch JD11 in the act of communicating with her. Instead, there was just the comatose body floating in the tank.

An hour later, her team was assembled for the morning meeting. After a brief look around, making sure everyone was paying attention, Lise said, “I think it is time to start thinking about when JD11 should be extracted. Your thoughts?”

Everyone looked around at each other. This was not a surprise only because they had become use to the unexpected when it came to this case. When the TIG had been designed, the idea was to leave the victim submerged until it was time to bring him out of a coma. This was expected to take months, not weeks or days. JD11 had been at the hospital for only a single week.

Dr. Ruiz, ever the nay-sayer said, “I see no reason to take him out anytime soon. Why would we? He is still in a coma and healing quite nicely.”

Ben Shepherd, the group optimist broke ranks with the past and sided with Ruiz. “I agree. I can see no benefit to early extraction.”

Lise expected as much. She, however, had information they didn’t. Forget what Annie said. A “thought” from a nurse’s assistant didn’t count as science. However, a brainwave printout showing coherent thought certainly was. She handed out copies to everyone.

The room was silent as each team member absorbed this new information.

Finally, surprising everyone, Dr. Ruiz spoke up. “How is this possible? The man is in a coma, not wide awake as this data seems to indicate. If this data is accurate, we need to get him out sooner rather than later.”

Lise looked around. Slowly, everyone nodded agreement.
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Annie sat in the strip mall parking lot until the gun shop opened at 10:00 am. She walked in, not sure what she was looking for but certain she would know it when she found it.

“Looking for anything in particular little lady?”

She looked up at the obese, unshaven hulk behind the counter. A week ago, such a man would have frightened her. Now, she could see through the outer shell. She saw a lonely man harboring fear. He was afraid of rejection so he maintained a “stay away from me” attitude that protected him from what he believed to be the inevitable. Annie didn’t fear him. Nor did she pity him. She accepted him and sent positive feelings his way.

The impact was immediately visible. He softened around the edges and his eyes took on a kinder look. It was as if he were saying he knew that she knew and he wanted to thank her for not turning away from him in disgust. An outside observer would have noticed nothing. Even the man was not sure what had happened. All he knew was that he wanted to help her, to make her safe.

“I think I need a gun.”

“I see. How about this one here?” he said holding up a small pistol. “It fits nicely into a purse; Perfect for protection.”

“What about that one?” she asked pointing at a huge handgun under the glass counter.


“I’m not sure that is the gun for you. It’s big, heavy and costs a lot more. You will need to get a bigger purse, that’s for sure.”

“That’s the one. I’ll take it.” She knew it was the right gun for her.

She filled out some paperwork. The salesman said she could pick up the gun in three days.

Annie went home, anxious to get to sleep. It had been a long night and maybe…maybe he would meet her in her dreams.


}11:00 am, Monday, March 23rd
Los Angles International Airport


Issac Schroeder disembarked from his plane and headed toward baggage claim. It had been a long night of flights and misdirection but it was just about over. One more identity change frand one more short flight to Reno and he would finally be in place.

Schroeder entered a bathroom and exited as Mike Halpin. At baggage claim, he picked up a bag that he had never seen before, but knew to be his none the less. In it he would find the latest reconnaissance for his mission.

He exited the terminal and caught a taxi which took him to another nearby, but much smaller airport. He’d be in Reno before 5:00 pm. From there, his next contact would fill him in on any more information. After that, he’d have to start following up on the various leads. This far, much of what he was suppose to be doing was little more than speculation. That’s how it always was. The secretive nature of his enemy made information hard to come by.

Rudolf wasn’t worried. He knew how to tickle the right information from even the smallest hint of a trail.

As the taxi made its way through the dense LA traffic, Rudolf opened a folder and studier the latest satellite images.

It seems that someone had been very busy over the last week; building something on a patch of nothing about seventy miles east of Reno. It seems a little sightseeing was next on his agenda.

ID: 1768844   (Rated: E)
Chapter 17 
Artifact stuns, Jack and Lise eat, Rudolf reflects.
by Hyperiongate

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