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''Eve Deceived In Sin''
The curse on man eating from the tree of wisdom.
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''God's Vision Of Sin On Earth''

In a garden green a dreadful scene
Eve and the devil deceiving mankind …
“Hello Eve, a lovely day to pick an apple
from the holy tree your wisdom forever,
but never when you see the gardener
talking to Adam by the tree of truth
warning him of the curse on man.”

“God reigns supreme my vision
a peaceful scene of squirrels
jumping darting in freedom,
seeing acorns on the ground
lying beneath a mighty oak tree,
a symbol of war against evil men
born from Eve in union with Adam,

cursed to plough the earth by hand
there with fire the bright lightning
strapped around their children,
exploding into fragments
trying to rule my world,
no need for mercy
my garden closed.

I will destroy this earth
building a bright heaven
beyond the moon and stars,
my cross on high the new sign
Christ crucified forgiving your sins,
gathering to fight your holy war
baking the bricks for a tower,

through clouds into heaven
your languages confused
trying to rule the earth,
blown away in my tornado
twisting twirling and broken,
confusing your mind to madness
the rebel in you baptized forgiven.

Now the veil had been rent in two
no more gentiles no more Jew,
my son arose from the dead
he had made no mistake."






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