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Rated: E | Prose | Other | #1779859
Wrote for a 100 words competition, then changed cos I got annoyed at having to stick to it
I’m pleased you're dressed nicely. We arrive at church. “Oh, doesn’t he look smart today!” they say. You duck your head, grimacing at me behind their backs. I grin back. You do look smart in your black and white checked shirt, buttoned up to the collar in exactly the same way as the boys - five years older than you- in my maths class. I can see the crease on your jeans where Mum turned them down yesterday ("You're getting so tall, darling!"). Your dark  brown Lego Hair™ tops off the look, conditioned only with Herbal Essences and combed to perfection. Awww, go on: I'll admit it. I'm proud you're my brother.
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