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Maiku and Kohari Part 1: Boy meets Girl
GTS story of eastern cat and mouse people (meaning no fur)
Rated:
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There is a world where cat people and mouse people live together on one world. the on worldwide law, which is new and no one takes seriously, is that cats can no longer eat mice.this is because that mice and cats are able to have children together and the child will be the same species as the parent whom shares the baby's gender (for example, if the child is a boy and the father is a mouse, the son will be a mouse). The adults respect this rule a lot as they have a sense of responsibility, but the teenagers don't realize that by eating mice, they are destroying families. one mouse family is aware of this and are over protective of their children because of it. The family has four children. The oldest: Yuki, a girl, the older middle: Konatsu, a girl, the younger middle: Betto, a girl, and the Youngest and only boy: Maiku. Yuki is very bossy and is somewhat of a brat. Konatsu is a troublemaker, always making fun of her siblings and refers to them as annoying. Betto and Maiku are pretty much best friends, despite the four year age difference (Betto is 19 and Maiku is 15) they are basically twins and are mistaken as such. If they were in the real world they would be Nigerian.

Maiku was on his way to school when he met his two friends, Yuna, a girl with an obivous crush on Maiku but he is oblivious to it, and Rei, Maiku's best friend outside of his house.

"Hey Maiku," Rei started "me and Yuna are gonna go into the go into the cats' part of the city after school today. You wanna come with us?"

Maiku looked exited as he has always wanted to see a cat person when he was young, but is ears then flattened on hhis head as he realized that his over-protective parents would't let him go to Rei's house when they first met back in grade 1. " My parents would never let me go. Sorry guys." he said with great disdain.

"Just say your going to the mall or something, Maiku-kun." said Yuna

"Great idea!" exclaimed Maiku as he reached in his pocket and brought our his cell phone to tell his parents that he was going to the mall. for some reason he paused and looked at Rei. "Can I spend the night at your place?"

Rei just smiled and said "rents are out of town on honey moon so why not. Yuna, I know since Maiku is coming you would want to come to." Rei said with a smile on his face.

Yuna's face turned bright red as he had just blurted out that she has feelings for Maiku, but he was still on the phone with his parents so he didn't hear. "Well its all clear from my end." he said with a smile and then turned to Yuna. "Yuna-chan, why don't you spend the night as well?"

Yuna blushed madly again "I-I guess i could sleep over." she said nervously.

"Alright, the three blind mice (no pun intended) are spending the whole day together." Said Rei with a large smile on his face. he was an attractive mouseboy with blue hair and ears, and green eyes. Usually chased by girls.

"Guys, good news!" said Yuna " I just remembered that today is an early release!" she exclaimed. Yuna was also attractive who had a c cup, and also a nice butt by most teenagers standards. She has black hair with black ears, and blue eyes.

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After school the three met at the front of the school.

"You guys ready?" asked Rei as they stared walking towards the nearest bus stop to head to cats' side of town.

Maiku and Yuna nodded in unison as the bus came to pick them up.

"we are now crossing the border" said the bus driver over the PA

Rei smiled and said "we are getting off on the next stop"

As they got off the bus the first thing they noticed was the size of everything. To them, it was huge but they also noticed the size of the people.

"Wow, this is amazing, I've never seen such big people before." Maiku said. they must have been 2 inches tall (which they were).

Yuna started to think to herself 'they is a major chance, if i act scared Maiku-kun will probably say something like 'don't worry, I'll never anything happen to you' I'm brilliant!' "Maiku-kun, I'm scar- huh" Maiku and Rei have already gone off "W-wait, Maiku-kun, Rei-kun wait for me! she yelled at the top her lungs.

Yuna caught up as Rei started to talk again. "Well actually i'm not nervous at all because my brother is married to a cat so i see them often."

"Your amazing Rei" Maiku said. Suddenly Maiku was snatched up by a giant hand.

"Wow, you look so delicious." said the catgirl

"Maiku-kun!" yelled Yuna "Rei, do something!" shouted Yuna.

As the catgirl was about to eat Maiku she stopped. "Wait... Rei?... Oji-chan (uncle)?" she said in confusion. She immediately noticed his unique blue hair, picked him up and rubbed him on her cheek (her way of hugging mice). "Oji-chan!"

"H-hey Kohari-chan. Guys, this is my niece, Kohari-chan. Kohari-chan, the one your holding in your right hand is Maiku and the one still floor is Yuna.

"Kohari? Little crystal? You?" asked Maiku

Kohari blushed as she just realized what had just happened. "I'm sorry that i tried to eat you Maiku-san. Oji-chan pleace don't tell my dad." she then looked back at Maiku and blushed harder as she realized that she was slowly falling for him.

Yuna noticed this and for some reason she felt jealous. "Hey pick me up too" Kohari did so and apologized toher for forgetting about her.

"So Maiku-san, is Yuna-san your girl friend" Kohari asked placing everyone on her shoulder except for Maiku.

Once again, Yuna blushed madly at the question. "No, She's my best friend along with your uncle."

"That'a good for me then." she said smiling and blushing. At this time Maiku got a good look at Kohari. She had orange hair to go with her orange cat ears, and blue eyes. He hair was in twin braids, which Maiku found cute.

"Say, uh... K-Kohari-san, how old are you anyway?" Maiku asked out of pure curiosity.

"Thirteen." She said happily.

Maiku and Yuna looked at Rei confused and he looked at them confused as well. "Oh I get it, my brother is 35 years old." he said. "speaking of my brother, where are your parents Kohari-chan?"

"They're off shopping for goods so I left the house to get fresh air. Daddy said not to eat any mice so that's why you can't tell him that I almost ate Maiku-san." explained Kohari

"That would be up to Maiku, I mean you tried to eat him, not me." said Rei

At this time Yuna was talking to herself in her mind again. 'Go on Maiku this tramp needs to be punished' she thought with an ominous smile on her face.

"Well how could I let a cute girl like you get in trouble because of me." Maiku said not realizing that Yuna had a purple aura of jealousy around her but Rei was starting to get scared.

"I know" started Kohari. " Why don't you guys spend the night over at my house? it'll be fun."

"Well the original plan was to spend the night at my house but either way, I'm fine with it. It's up to those two." said Rei.

"I don't think that would be a good ide-" Yuna was interrupted by Maiku.

"This will be my first time in a cat's house. This is the chance of a life time" Maiku exclaimed as a large smile appeared on his face.

Yuna, being the love sick puppy she is, had no choice but to agree with Maiku's decision. "Yay!"yelled Kohari as she started running to her house with Rei and Yuna holding on for dear life.

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Kohari finally stopped running (funnily enough, it was the mice who were out of energy). "We're finally here Oji-chan, Maiku-san." she said again, forgetting about Yuna. She entered the house and said "Momma, Daddy, we've got guests.

A Beautiful blonde-haired catgirl (whose eyes always seemed to be closed) peeped her head out of the kitchen and then left the kitchen carrying a mouseboy. "Rei? Why are you here lil' bro?"

Rei smiled. "Touring with my friends. oh and by the way, we're spending the night here. Love ya!" he said with a large grin.

"Kohari..." said Kohari's dad. "Something tells me this is your doing." he finished

The catgirl just smiled. "Honey just let your brother and his friends stay. Please make yourselves at home. Call me Aki and he's Shu.

"Well I'm just gonna take them upstairs." said Kohari as she went upstairs. They arrived in a room that was blue and has a lot of giant stuffed animals (for The mice). Kohari put the mice on the floor as she layed down on the floor.smiling down at them. Rei is actually terrified of his niece and the only time Maiku was afraid of Kohari was when she almost ate him. Yuna is only afraid because a love-rival just entered her life. "You guys wanna watch T.V.?" asked the young catgirl

The black skinned mouse was the one to reply. "Well what is there to watch right now." suddenly music came out of nowhere. It was Maiku's phone. "Sorry guys, I gotta take this. Hello? yeah I'm at Rei's house now... Yes Mom... Oka- hey" Kohari picked Mwiku up and asked who he was atlking to "my parents Kohari-san."

"Who's Kohari?" everyone heard from the phone.

"Uh, Rei's niece. She's spending the night here to... Alright love you too bye. Only my parents would call to see if i have been eaten by a cat." said Maiku.


"But, you were almost eaten by a cat Maiku-kun" said Yuna.

"Yeah but that same cat is still harmless." Replied Maiku.

"Kohari-chan, c-could you please let me talk to Maiku for a second?" asked Rei.

"Sure Oji-chan" said Kohari as she let Maiku down.

"Maiku, I can see a mutual atraction between you and my niece" said Rei. "To be honest, she looks head over heels for you and you're actually returning the feelings."

"Whats that supposed to mean, of course if a girl likes me and i find her attractive, I would totally return the feelings". replied Maiku.

Rei gave Maiku a look that said 'are you serious?' "Yeah yeah whatever. I'm going two places with this. Number one, how can you find your self attracted to that monster?" Rei said.

"Rei... Are you scared of your own niece?" asked Maiku.

"Of course! When she was 3, she tried to eat me, and then again when she was 6, and even a few months ago. It's only because of my sister in law that i was able to find my way out of Kohari-chan's mouth." stated Rei. "I think either you're a macrophile, or you're a lolicon."

Maiku only gave a dull look at Rei, a small blush apearing on Maiku's face but wasn't very visible. "What else is there, you said there was to things right?" asked Maiku.

Rei grinned his usual grin. "Well it sounds strange in my head but that would be amazing if my best friend was going out with my niece, who is a cat."

"Wouldn't that make us family?" asked Maiku.

Rei smirked once again. "Yup. We'll be even closer than we already are." They gave each other props and headed back towards the girls who was waiting patiently.

"So, you guys wanna watch a movie?"

"Yeah, how about a horror movie?" Asked Yuna quietly.

"Yeah I love horror movies!" exclaimed Kohari. After hearing this, Yuna felt her anger for Kohari lessening because they have the same interest in movies.

"Well, I was thinking more of a romantic comedy, or action". said Rei. Maiku didn't need to say anything as most people knew that if Rei liked it, Maiku liked it and vice versa.

Kohari's ears flattened on her head as she does respect her uncle quite a lot so she had no choice to but to agree with her choice. "Okay Oji-chan. I do have some action movies." She said with a large smile, showing her fangs.

Rei mistook her smile as a threat as his niece was showinig her fangs, but in truth, thats just the way she smiles. "No no no. it's your choice Kohari-chan. We'll watch a horror movie." Rei said, trying to hide his fear.

Kohari smiled again, looking at Yuna now. " Yuna-san, which one do you want to see I have so many." she said.

Yuna looked up at looked up at the catgirl. "What movies do you have?" asked Yuna.

Kohari smiled again, picked Yuna up and stood up to walk to a shelf which had tonnes of Movies inside, shaking the ground for Maiku and Rei with every step. Yuna was not only shocked at the number of movies, but the size of them too. She looked around and then saw a familiar Movie case. "Ahh... that's the killer ghost mouseboy!" said Yuna "thats my favorite scary movie." she said happily.

"Ah, that's my favorite too!" exclaimed Kohari, taking the movie in her hands, opening the case, and looking at the disk as if looking for scratches. " Alright, lets watch it." Kohari said.

"you know, you're not so bad, Bokeneko (stupid cat)."

At first, Kohari took that as an insult, flattening her ears on her head but realized that this might just be Yuna's way of showing her affection. Kohari put Yuna down by Rei and put the DVD in the DVD player.

Yuna smiled, though Kohari had stolen Maiku from her by accident, Yuna found a bond forming between her and Kohari.

The movie is about a mouseboy who dated a catgirl, but one day the boy dumped her leading to his death. (she ate him). After she started dying again, whether it was a cat or a mouse who she dated, they all kept on mysteriously dying, leaving their bodies where the catgirl can see the bodies, all bloody. the killer was the dead mouseboy's ghost, wielding a knife for cats. Most of the deaths were seen by the views as a random floating knife stabbing people.

Maiku and Rei watched the movie but were not afraid as both of them only had one fear. Maiku had the fear of a lecture from his parents (mom more than dad as his dad had a more laid back personality than his mom) and Rei is afraid of his niece, as noted earlier,

Kohari and Yuna screamed in the first five minutes of the movie, when the first boyfriend after the catgirl at the mouseboy. Kohari's scream startled Rei and he let out a slight shriek, as they all laughed at him. Even Rei laughed.

After about fifteen seconds, the door to Kohari's room opened. It was Aki. "I heard screams, is everybody alright?"

Rei is the one who answered. "Yes Nee-chan (older sister as she is his sister-in-law), we're only watching a scary movie." he said.

"Well you all should have told me. I'll go make some poppin' corn for you guys." Aki said as she left the room and closed the door.

They all laughed again. Maiku was lying down on Kohari's giant lap as he looked at his phone to check the time. It was 10:30.

Upon noticing the time, Maiku also noticed that a Mouse that looked even younger than Kohari. "Nee-chan, I'm home from my friends house!" The mouse said only noticing Kohari.

Kohari paused the movie and looked at the mouse with a smile. "Welcome home,
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