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Getting Down
The Amazing 55 Word Contest Entry
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Disco music palpitated in Donnie's chest as he stepped haltingly onto the lighted floor.  Cheers arose from the crowd, feeding his ego.  His youthful partner smiled with intoxicated amusement.  In unison, their bodies and souls became one with the pounding beat.  Suddenly, a hand pressed Donnie's shoulder and two nursing home orderlies led him away.

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ID: 1253724   (Rated: ASR)
The Amazing 55 Word Story Contest 
Can you tell a story in exactly 55 words? Come on in and join the fun!
by Storm Machine

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