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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1800180  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
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She holds breath in quivering lungs
Lids open like gates
Allowing the light to touch water
A burning union
Her thought is nothing
The vanity entrenched
She stretches to grasp the expanse
Pretentious and suffocating
Erotic and overwhelming
Could there be anyone less deserving of the view?
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