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Rain
Prompt: Write a BAD poem using flowers and rain in freeverse.
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Rain

The flowers are wet.
The rain coated them.

In tears.

Every daisy bows her head.
Every Thorn looks for a victim.

Still it rains.

Like a leaky faucet,
The sky drips uncontrollably.

Ruination.

Too much, it pours.
Over the flooded dirt.

Poisoning.

For like all else
Too much of a good thing

Wilts dreams.



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