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Content Rating Notice: XGC -- May Contain Extreme Graphic Content
Only For: 18 and Older, Not Offended
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Punishing Adultery
For cheating, she gets to watch him... with a man
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Punishing Adultery


“Don’t you ever fantasize?”

Keely glared at her husband. The rotten cheating bastard had gotten caught. Well, she at least knew there was someone else. She’d followed her intuition and the idiot had admitted it, finally.

“I do.” She nodded, “and I think you should make my fantasy come true as penance.”

His eyes widened. “You want me to let you cheat?”

She laughed, “You would think that way. No, I want you to have sex and let me watch,” she watched as curiosity swallowed him, then she finished her sentence, “with a man.”

Pete shook his head, “No.”

Keely sighed, “Then I’ll have divorce papers drawn up tomorrow. Until then, you can stay in a hotel.”

She heard his groan of frustration, “Keely, wait. Is this really what it will take?”

“You fulfilled your fantasy, Pete, now fulfill mine.”

Two Weeks Later


The man Pete had chosen from the gay bar surprised her. Quinton was muscular, blue-eyed, blonde, bronzed, and oh so deliciously clean-shaven. She hadn’t expected Pete to pick someone so her type.

She stared at Quinton as he stood naked at the foot of her bed. Gazing at Pete, he wrapped one hand around the thick length of meat hanging between his legs.

Pete watched him, his eyes following the confident hand as it slid up and down the elongating shaft. From where Keely sat, she recognized the rising passion in his eyes. He was getting into it. That fact alone excited her and she could feel the dampness erupt between her thighs.

“Touch me,” Quinton commanded.

Pete didn’t hesitate; he wrapped his hand around the base of the pulsing member, creating a warm glove and slid upwards, the exact way he had handled himself so many times.

Keely gasped as Pete fondled the other man. Her womb clenched and unclenched and her nipples pebbled. She readjusted herself on the leather chair and slid her finger slowly back and forth in the dripping slit between her thighs, her eyes never leaving the show.

Quinton’s head was thrown back, his eyes closed as Pete massaged him and his hips thrust back and forth in time with Pete’s tempo. Pete turned and looked at her, his eyes hard and full of lust.

Suddenly, Quinton dislodged himself and took a step back. Keely watched as he dropped to his knees and shoved Pete backwards onto the bed. He was on him quickly, sucking every inch of Pete’s rock hard erection into his mouth. Pete groaned and his hips rose off the bed.

Keely had never seen anything so erotic. As she watched another man blowing her husband, she was more excited than she’d been in years, and obviously, so was Pete. Her hand wandered south; over her firm belly and through the triangle of golden curls she kept neatly trimmed. With a sigh, she plunged three fingers into her tight cavern.

Pete’s legs were spread wide and Quinton suckled his sac before using his tongue to trace Pete’s puckered anus. All the while, his hand stroked up and down Pete’s length.

“I’m going to give it to you good,” Quinton said as he stroked the tight rim. Pete tensed, his body coiled tightly, and pulled his legs in towards his chest.

Keely kept her rhythm, thrusting her fingers into her swollen folds as Quinton rose from the floor, slathered Pete’s anus in lube and positioned his engorged prick for entrance. He paused, looked at Keely and at her slight nod, buried himself to the hilt.

Pete’s sharp intake of breath mingled with the sight of his chasm stretching and swallowing Quinton’s rigid flesh brought Keely to the peak of pleasure. She whimpered and cried out as her body froze there, at the periphery of ecstasy, refusing to plunge over into the abyss.

“Keely,” Pete’s rough voice captured her attention even as she frantically fingered herself, “come here.”

She obeyed him, jumped from the chair and ran across the room. She climbed up on the bed and eased into a backwards straddle over his distended nether limb.

Quinton slowed his pace, plunging in and out of Pete smoothly with long, sure strokes. Keely watched, her body racked with tremors as tight balls slapped against her husband’s steely buttocks. She waited patiently, timing the thrust and parry until she could feel it vibrate through her. In perfect harmony, she impaled herself, rising and falling to the cadence Quinton had set.

Pete cried out, his hips bucking as Quinton pounded into him and Keely swallowed him.

Keely was drowning in her fantasy – watching Quinton screw Pete while Pete stretched and pierced her was the ultimate in both visual and physical stimulation.
“I’m going to come,” Quinton grunted, slamming into Pete over and over as he climaxed.

Pete dug his fingers into the soft flesh of Keely’s hips as he surged upwards, filling her with his seed.

Keely threw her head back and screamed as she fell over the edge, her heart hammering.

Six months later, Keely looked back on that day as she signed the divorce papers. She should have known. The signs were all there. Pete’s lover had been a man.


Word Count: 859

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The Weekly Quickie Contest  [18+]
OPEN! Can you excite in 869 words? Rd 18 til 6/3. Prompt: Pitch a Tent Host: Dawn
by Dawn☆Embers

Prompt: Something Different
Explanation: I love writing erotica and my stories are ones I enjoy but even I get bored doing some of the same things over and over. Let's face it: there are only certain numbers of actions that can be used and it's easy to fall to the use of words. But today, how about we do something different. The topic prompt is also Something Different, so even new writers can do something though I have a bonus for anyone who wants to take the challenge. Have your character do something different and if you want, do something different too.
Bonus: Think over the past stories you've written and see if there is anything you do often. Then make a small list, including things like words used for body parts, actions, feelings, etc, or even the actions and such themselves. Avoid anything on that list. Post the things you avoided either in the story (doesn't count towards the word count I promise) or in the post when you submit the story.


Things I avoided:
*Note* The typical male/female scene
*Note* Happy Ending
*Note* My usual words: pussy, cock, dick, orgasm, hole
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