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Would it Matter?
If we knew who we were hurting, would our actions be the same?
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By myself I hide, knowing
lives are being torn apart.
If only they could see me,
would they still venture away?

It’s easy to say goodbye
when no one is watching you.
Would they still venture away,
if only they could see me?

Love turns into lies and hate.
Destiny breaking my heart.
If only they could see me.
Would they still venture away?

Child-like tears fall in silence.
Thoughts wondering if they knew,
would they still venture away?
If only they could see me. . .


Mirrored Refrain Poem:
The poem has a minimum of four stanzas
The rhyme scheme is as follows: xaBA, xbAB, xaBA, xbAB, etc..
x represents the only lines that do not rhyme within the poem. A and B represent
the refrain.
Every first line does not rhyme with the rest of the poem.
The last two lines are refrains so they repeat.
Stanza set up:
xaBA
xbAB
xaBA
xbAB
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