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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Drama >> ID #1808723  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Adrift
Thinking about how my mental process works inspired the final stanza, spawning the rest.
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The horizon is hidden
by ever growing waves
of hands,
reaching,
yet untouched.

I am beaten down
with roaring swells
of laughter,
boisterous,
yet silent.

I cannot view the stars
beyond the flood
of tears,
guiding,
yet unseen.

I am adrift
amidst a bustling sea
of humanity,
surrounded,
Yet lost.
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