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Chill
Setting sun leaves sizzling spaces Giving warmth to tiny places; But the sun’s warmth slowly departs Leaving chill in all lonely hearts. ========================================================= Maintaining My Defenses External to the edges of my existence, 12 I have no control over the consequences 12 with regard to your own life participation. 12 Infringements upon my inflamed interior 12 masticate like the cutting canines of critters 12 when they become feral from fear and famishment.12 My defenses are delusion and denial 12 because I've found continuously caring costs 12 more than my mind's methodology can manage.12 ========================================================= Aging Woman in Repose She gathers and guards her treasures – gathers/guards 8 there is little else to measure 8 a lifetime now in the past tense.8 She mutters not making much sense. Making/much 8 Yellowed letter from her husband, 8 envelope opened and reopened, *9* a twist of lovely golden hair 8 from when he was young and fair 8. Ragged heart shapes with childish scrawls, 8 "I love you, Mom," the message calls mom/message 8 to old memories of days gone by. *9* Oh, how quickly the time can fly! 8 Ink penned poems in a journal, 8 paint a picture like a mural, paint/picture 8 of woman's romantic soul, *7* composed when her mind was still whole. 8 She gathers and guards her treasures. 8 These tokens provide a measure 8 of a lifetime now in the past tense. *9* She mutters and to God makes sense. 8
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