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Today is so horrible I am so sick. I dont know what to do I knkow how to feel better. I have been sick for a while I thinkt hat MY tem is up sometimes. I don't know what to type. I started to ask the kids to type but nowne of them would.
I might just write write many words. To think outside the box. If you can't imagine aliens taking over the eighteenth-century manor you've written, imagine how those aliens could work as a metaphor. Jacob could not believe what he had seen. The light spooked his horse away from him. He was left in the brightest light that he had ever seen. Then he began to float up to it. Now he is in a dark room, strapped to a table, and sounds of chatter accompanied by the humming of motors. Jacob could not understand what the voices were saying. They seemed to want to know something. What did he know that they would want?Electric had not been invented yet, and these people (if they were people) had a light brighter than the sun. Lights begin to show shadowed creatures. The moved slow on three legs. One of them came and chattered with its (finger, I think) in Jacob's face. It was determined to get what it wanted, but what was it that it wanted? Finally, one of the aliens brought something into the room. It was a human child. The figures lead the child gently to Jacob. Jacob doesn't know what to think about this. He takes the child by the hand. The leader or captain pushes a section of his uniform. This changed his language into English. “This child is the future of your planet. He is a hybrid of our genetics, both human and stark. Your world is going to be destroyed by the sun. This child can with stand heat and water. It can reproduce by its self. He is the survival of your world.” Jacob wakes by the outside gates of the castle. He was thinking that he had had too much to drink the night before. Then he sees the sleeping child. He knows that he has to raise the future of the world. This is how my story was at the beginning, but I had to change it. I have done more research to make it more interesting. I truly hate that this is timed. I am sucking typing right now. I am sweating like crazy, and head, face, neck, throat, ears, and stomach hurts. I am so tired that I don't know what to do to feel better. I am so cold, and then hot. I am not happy witnh pain . Character Profile Sheet Age: 41 Name: Lilly Location: Sarasota, Fl Family History: A divorced mother of three from Smalltown Kentucky career aspirations: Disabled aspiring to be a published author Race: White (hillbilly) Features: Bright eyes, soft spoken, family orienated, creative, smart, and too dependant Appearance: Large woman, glasses, pretty smile, short 5'2", very small hands Likes: Likes Church, children, poetry, taking photos, taking care of others dislikes: controvercy, bullies, loud agressive music, saying no to anyone Physical condition: poor sight, achey bones, Ailments: fainting spells Education: Women life skills, freshman in college Social Economic background: Rounded social life, church, party friends, internet friends Parents: Married 30 years divorced, mom lived close in KY, dad in a nursing home Siblings: Two sisters, a brother all live in KY Ambition: published author, loose weight, go back to school Hobbies: writing, drawing, painting, quilting, most things creative Significant Others: Ezra a man she met at work while she was married... After the divorce they were dating. He moved to FL to be with his daughters and mother.. Intelligence: Most people see her as very smart, but the only opinion she cares about is EZRA's.. His is not alway flattering. Emotional Stability: Going through the change, relationship centered, secretly depressed. Flaws: cares too much about what others think... don't take control of how others treat her Traits: always thinking how to make others happy. You have a meal in your place before you can even make your plate. Pivital events in life : She uses a cpap and wishes that she would go back to church Favorite foods: meat loaf Religion: Christian Personality: friendly, fun, nurturing Habits: Rocking while trying to go to sleep.. want to run when in an argument. Favorite thing to do: Pamper loved one, take pictures of little things that are over looked normally Comfort level with opposite sex: Though she can not see anything beautiful in herself, men seem to want to be a part of her life either as one nights or protectors. Things they take pride in: Her children, ablity to forgive, survival, poetry Things that bother them: religious jokes, "hot" describing women Things that make them laugh: comedies, children remarks, and goofy people Speech patterns: speaks proper grammar, until the hills culture slips in. slight accent Character Profile Sheet Age: 34 Name: Ezra Location: Sarasota Family History: Married 10 years, met Lilly while married working across the street from her work career aspirations: muscian Race: White Features: 120 lbs, 5'10", green/brown eyes Appearance: Slim, wears a cap and sun glasses Likes: Beer, joking, clubs, cooking, picking on Lilly dislikes: Athority figures, loud children, and interupting him during a movie/video games. Physical condition: able, Ailments:stomach problems Education: GED Socio Economic background: working, drugging friends, parties, Parents:muscian father Siblings: a younger brother and sister Ambition: have money and travel Hobbies: paint balling, music, video games Significant Others: Lilly Intelligence: Street smart, good with math, able to read people Emotional Stability: untrusting of women Flaws: drinks, smokes, and likes to control Traits: Hates to be waited on, like to pluck nerves, and has a temper Pivital events in life: divorce, children going to mother Favorite foods: Steak, his moma's and his cooking Religion: belives, but also believes in poking fun to get a reaction from Lilly Personality: dominating, right Habits: cussing, drinking, games, paintballing, math Favorite thing to do: cook, news, and sports Comfort level with opposite sex: very sweet with them, helpful, and looked at as a friend Things they take pride in: Friends, how he has helped Lilly grow Things that bother them: children being aloud to take charge Things that make them laugh: Slap stick, hanging with Lilly Speech patterns: cussing Character Profile Sheet Age 55 Name: Chester Location: Lilly's upstairs neighbor Family History: Unknown career aspirations: Retired 16 year Vet Race: White redneck Features: loud drunk Appearance: About 6' with a beer belly Likes: beer, country music, fighting dislikes: children, Eara not wanting to visit Physical condition: Always drunk Ailments: NA Education: NA Socio Economic background: He and room mate were loners Parents: unknown Siblings: Unknown Ambition: annoy each other and neighbors Hobbies: unknown Significant Others: none Intelligence: unknown Emotional Stability: possible war shock Flaws: loud and tries to pull people to his place Traits: bragget Pivital events in life : war Favorite foods: unknown Religion: Unknown Personality: loud Habits: drinking and fighting Favorite thing to do: Talking to neighbors over the banster Comfort level with opposite sex: no woman seen there Things they take pride in: war Things that bother them: Children playing, being told no Things that make them laugh: unkown Speech patterns: Hilly billy Character Profile Sheet Age: 68 Name: BUB Location: upstairs neighbors Family History: Unknown career aspirations retired Race: White Features: slow moving Appearance: 6" tall slumped to about 5'9. beer belly Likes: Beer, odd jobs dislikes: chester Physical condition: weak old Ailments: limbs Education: unknown Socio Economic background: unknown Parents: unknown Siblings: unknown Ambition: over Hobbies: drinking Significant Others: none Intelligence: low Emotional Stability: fighting Flaws: Loud Speech patterns: mubbles Character Profile Sheet Age: 68 Name: Penny Location: apartment rental office Family History: Unknown career aspirations apartment manager Race: White Features: always smiling Appearance: wears the long braid, glasses, and genes Likes: conversation dislikes: messy tentants Physical condition: attractive Ailments: none Education: college Socio Economic background: unknown Parents: unknown Siblings: unknown Ambition: over Hobbies: unknown Significant Others: unknown Intelligence: high Emotional Stability: strong Flaws: none Speech patterns: proper Include both positive and negative traits. Be detailed and be explicit. These attributes do not necessarily have to be brought out in the play but go into making up the character in the mind’s eye of the playwright. Once this requirement is complete, the student is encouraged to begin writing the drama with an eye to quickly completing a rough first draft. Try and do this in one sitting and if this is too difficult, then lower your standards and use “thin prose” as placeholders that the writer will come back and fill in in greater depth, later. The initial draft is the working model that will be refined and developed in future edits. It is a living document . Submit the lesson requirement as a single bitem. At a minimum the three (3) Profile Sheets, and the Significant Event listing on the Central Character..In your word processor go ahead and type out the three requirements on a single page and move it over to your port and make it a static item. Post the Homework in bitem format in the Class forum. I know that I am jpastimg, but it isn't even workning on my word oulnffg. It hink thato was a challenges. too.
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