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Father's back ground and intro to story

I love the quesitons and thoughts they have my muse flowig this morning...

Dad is a true arrogant Arab. Has two sons one wife and loves none of them. He is into money and status. He knows Mufid, because as part of a trade off he got to move up in the ranks by "selling" Mufid to the radical sect. He has nothing to do with his US son who desperately wants to be acknowledged and part of this radical world. Really his father is only in it for the money and has no part of the radicals. The movers and shakers of the $$ power are supplying the radicals with guns amo and stuff to accumulate power and property so that they can conquor all the Arab world and be in control. Mufid and Anthony are pawns in the big scheme. I think when Anthony meets his father and isn't even recognized and is brushed off, He sees his father for what his is. and then want him dead. so he starts the count down to the bombers.

Mufid sees that his father has no use for him and care nothing for him as a son as he is suddenly informed that Anthony is a half brother. And is told he is one of many "sons" who have served him as thier father.  Mufid does not want to die. He sees that anthony must be in with the suicide bombers and leaves to tell the HLS and the Chief of Security.  Anthony finds Mufid making his way to the security hdq and pulls his gun to take him quietly away.  ok that is all thought up at this moment. Maybe  Beth has to see them and see that Mufid is being manhandled by Anthony. She starts to go to help Mufid, but is waylaid by a TSA who knws she was in the room with the woman who died and wants to question her about the incident....frusttation climax? what to do? this will have to be resolved...

Wow this is what just came to me as I fit your questions and suggestions into my plot plan!!! thanks this really fleshes out some parts I thought might be a writers block or a possible part I may have written myself into a corner....I think that corner just became a curved halway!!! YeA!!
On 10/21/11 at 9:45pm, Butch50

Anthony watches his half brother walk away and go to the coffee shp. Anger infuses his body as he realizes that his father will talk to Mufid but totatlly ignores Anthoy. Because of the innocently writtne letters, his father cut off all support to Anthony and his mother. She worked 3 jobs to help him get through a community college. He was able to get scolarships for the next four yers and he patitioned the cell who paid some of the book costs out of charity. He didn't like the charity but money was money and his father owed him. He saw Beth making her way down the long hall. She was on a mission and when he turned to see who she was going to see it was the head of HLS and the Chief. He slipped around teh crowds of travelers and made his way right behind Bet. He abducted her sying he had nothing to lose right new but she was not going to get anywhere near thsoe men. He tries to make eye contact with the traveler but no one would looke at her. the ones she did connect with turned away and didnt'e want to get involved  Behind the excalators she ushered him into a room. It was a supplu room. there was a metal pipe agains the wa;; and Anthony handcuffed her too it. he didn't speak as he left her there.  She had to get out. She had to find Mufid and make sure they were on to the men.



Mufid's story
raised to hate the Christian infidels and trained in the art of killing but sent as a sponsor to help other cell memebers get into US, he wants nothing to do with the citzens of the US. There is a neighbor couple Daniel and ? M who go out of their way to befriend Mufid and his wife Mari.  Daniel has offered friendship and help only to be rebuffed time and time again. Once after a year or so, Mari had a plumbing problem and called Daniel for help. she couldn't reach Mufid. Daniel came and shut off water. He and wife cleaned and set out fans to dry house. Wife asked Mari to bring baby to their house while it wet carpet dried. Mufid came home and Mari went to him and reluctantly thanked Daniel who asked that no thanks was needed, neighbors did that in the US. Others in the neighbor hood were hostile back but Daniel and wife encouraged others to put aside predudices and be friendly. some did others not.