NEXT SCENE....

         I watch this man move around like he didn't have a care in the world. Anxiety turns to rage as the object catches fire.
I throw on my coat, grabb my keys and fly out the door. I pray that my 2006 Toyota Camery will o un noticed, as i pull out of
my driveway.

         Obeying the speed limit, i pull up to the stop sign. The Blue mini van only two cars ahead, turns left. I follow the man
until he turns into an apartment complex. Unsure about what to do next, my nerves on high alert. I drive past the entrance and stop.




3rd person.

         Kimberlyn watched this man move around like he didn't have a care in the world. Anxiety turned to rage as the object
caught fire. She threw on her coat, grabbing her keys as she flew out the door. She prayed that her 2006 Toyota Camery would go
un noticed as hse pulled out of the driveway.

         Obeying the speed limit she pulled up to the stop sign. The Blue mini van only two cars ahead, turned left. She followed
the man until he turned into an apartment complex. Unsure about what to do next, her nerves on high alert. She drove past the entrance
and stopped.