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Short Story/Novel Review Template
Rated: E | Other | Other | #1867119
Just a sample but can change sigs, emotions and colors for other groups!
*RainbowL*A Review from "Simply Positive Forum!*RainbowR*


Hello Sticktalker , I'm Metu, and I will review your story "Snowsuit Gone Bad to the best of my knowledge. I hope this review will help you in improving your story. Please, consider them only if you see fit.

NOTE: Please keep in mind that you have my utmost esteem for sharing your work with us, no matter what my rating or comment may seem to implicate, all the suggestions made here are only opinions proposed to improve your work, and as the writer, you extremely have the final say on your own creation.



*Star* OPENING:
S

*Star* CONFLICT:
E:

*Star* PLOT:
E

*Star* SETTING:
Y

*Star* CHARACTERIZATION:
A

*Star* DIALOGUE:
S

*Star* POINT OF VIEW:
O

*Star* SHOW VERSUS TELL:
O

*Star* TEXT FORMAT:
N

*Star* GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:
L

*Star* SUGGESTED IMPROVEMENT:
Y

*Star* STYLE:
L

*Star* OTHER COMMENTS:
E

Breaker




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