Searching for Life
shows we aren't satisfied with our lives. We always want something,someone,change or not.
|What do you think of my poem. I know it needs work and it is shorter. It doesn't flow all the way through. In my opinion it loses its flow in the 3rd line.
Wrote the night of- July 8th, 2012 at a friends house :)
(When I started really thinking about poetry and taking it seriously)
Have a poem page on Facebook with all the poems i'm posting to you guys in it.
Everyone lives there life always hopein for somethin better.
Weather they believe it will come true they still hopein, hopein, an hopein.
They search for somethin new or even just somethin to help fix things.
They lookin for something, in anyones case. That something is what people long for.
Something you know you cant have or wish you could change.
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