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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Nature >> ID #192124  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Star Gazing
10 years ago this same star looked back at me
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Star Gazing

Hiding in a silo where all else is
Ex-ter-nal
Your face is radiant in this dim light nocturnal
A dozen pairs of stealthless whispers
Drifting every which direction
East and west, confounding sounding
But still you look my way
Over to this briefest glance we share e-ter-nal
Reminiscent now ten years since
And I know what you wanted to say
As still all I can say is

         Saturn is full now - make a wish


[related non-fiction: "Observatory]
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