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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Drama >> ID #373614  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Whenever You Hurt
Whenever you feel miserable I feel the same
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Whenever you feel pain I cry
I feel tears whenever you frown
You say that crying never helps
But I can never stop my tears
Once they begin
I hurt whenever you do
I share your misery
I feel a hole inside my heart
You mean everything to me
And I hate to see you sad
All I want is to help you
I just want to see you smile
But you tell me not to help
You say don't even bother
That you don't want to be cheered up
Though you never tell me why
But whenever you smile
I smile with you
And whenever you laugh
I laugh too
You make me happy
And that's why I love you
But it hurts
Because I share your pain
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