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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #406203  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
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This poem is one i wrote telling my emotions to a girlfriend...
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I'm so in love with you,
I can't see the break of day,
I'm lost in a swirling sea,
where there is no light,
except the light you radiate.
You look like an angel.
You must be one,
because you are so great.
I'm in love with you so far,
that small things remind me of you.
I can't escape the whirlpool that
has drawn me in.
I'm like a bee to a flower,
only I'm staying here forever.
I'll do whatever you want of me,
because I care for you,
I love you.
The dawn breaks,
but I don't see it.
All I see is your face.
You are so beautiful,
words cannont be found
to describe the way you look.
All I can use are the words of old...
You look great. You look magnificent.
But these words are old. And they don't fit
the person. You are more than magnificent.
You surpass magnificent a hundredfold.
You surpass great ten thousandfold.
I'll love you forever,
even if you don't.
A part of you will always be with me.
Anytime you want me to,
I'll remove my armor, throw down my weapon,
toss away my shield and dismount from my steed,
so you can judge me...or so you can see who I really am.
All I feel for you is...
Love.
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