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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #406292  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
You Amazed Me
This is my first Poetry Palace Assignment. I normally stay away from rhyming poetry.
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You Amazed Me

One was amazed
At the wonder of your touch
Your gentleness…your wit…
The tenderness you show
I love you oh so much!

“My passion is gone.
There’s nothing left.” I said.


One was not amazed
By the lightness of my heart
As I hear your voice…
See your smile…feel you
Against me ~ part for part.

“My passion is gone.
There’s nothing left.” I said.


Yet one was surprised
That I woke up at last
Due to your patience…
Your touch…your love
My uncaring days are past.



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