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  >> Static Item >> Short Story >> Contest >> ID #425464  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Blood and Blade
My entry that won 3rd in the Short Short Story Contest, in which you only use 100 words
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         Our blades touched, and sparks flew. We jumped back at the force of the blow, the sound of metal against metal ringing in the air. Rain poured down, washing away our sweat and tears. But I didn't notice.
         I knew that this was the end. I ran towards him again, shouting an angry battle cry. The man smiled, baring his dirty, yellow teeth. He pulled out a hidden crossbow, and shot me through my gut. I fell to my knees in pain, and looked up. "Goodbye, brother," he said as he aimed right between my eyes. He fired.
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