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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #444524  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
He was here... he really was...
Not good enuff to win... but, I like it... writen for Judith's Newbie Contest... :)
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He was here... he really was...

Where did daddy go?
He was just here... I know it...
I just saw him just yesterday...
We even played together...

He took me to the baseball game...
He even took me fishing...
We caught some big fishes...
Our team won the game...

Where did daddy go?
Daddy was here yesterday...
He took me to school,
We had ice cream at my party...

He took me to the great big zoo...
And even too the park...
We got to ride the roller coaster...
We even saw elephants...

Where did daddy go?
Why did daddy have to leave?
Mommy says he wont be back...
Where did daddy go?
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