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  >> Static Item >> Lyrics >> Relationship >> ID #446193  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
slow dance forever in the rain...
This I wrote but a week ago to communicate desire to my english Girlfriend
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Can't you see me dying?
cant' you see me crying in the distance that I roam?
can't you see me sighing?
because I want ta take you home.

can you see the lightning in my pale moon's sky?
can you hear the thunder that it brings?
one thing I wish for is that it's just you and I.
so we could slow-dance forever in the rain.

I can't see me facing another year...
I don't wanna see you shed another tear...
I can't stand your stories about the other man with whom you shared your
beer.
because I wish you were sitting next to ME, right here.

Do you understand what I try to convey?
that's ok, cause sometimes, neither do I.
sometimes I cant believe I wrote the words that you see.
but its all because I really wish you were here with me.

I love ya, mate.
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