Intro. to my work

Review Of "What I can't promise you...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Kings (79) piewhackett1
Date and Time: 09-08-05 @ 10:58pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Lovelyone,
This is a beautifully written piece of true love poetry, my friend.

Simply written with words of deep description and devotion.

The flow was fluid like a mountain stream cascading down over the ripples of the rocks.

Thank you for the read.
Kings (Carl)
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Review Of "What I can't promise you...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Kira (27) hateislove
Date and Time: 06-11-06 @ 4:21pm

This is a very honest poem, written with a certain elegance and grace that I haven't seen in a very long time. To portray emotion in poetry is often very difficult for some people, but you have no trouble in showing the extent to which you feel for the person in question.

The rhymes feel natural as you read them and the rhythm is constant.

Very well done

Kira
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Review Of "What I can't promise you...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Incurable Romantic (68) jwilliamson
Date and Time: 04-22-06 @ 12:16am
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

You're right. I loved THIS too. The emotions are strong, and in the open. The feelings come out freely and continuously. It's great. Wonderful work, my friend.

See you soon!
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Review Of "What I can't promise you...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: FreeFall (12) a.b.harrison
Date and Time: 06-13-06 @ 7:12pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

I think that whoever said that it reads like a wedding vow was right. I also think that it was one of the most beautiful things I personally have ever read! I only wish I read it before my wedding. they would have been perfect! But then again, maybe not. I just managed to get through without tears or outbreaks of nervious laughter. This would have pushed it way toward the tears.
Beautiful job! Keep up the absolutely wonderful work!
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Review Of "What I can't promise you...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Date and Time: 06-08-06 @ 7:17am

Absentminded Professor? You certainly don't sound absentminded! "What I Can't Promise You" is an excellent poem, and ever so true.
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Review Of "What I can't promise you...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Date and Time: 06-12-06 @ 12:17pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

A beautiful tribute to a loved one.
it's true it can be exchanged for a wedding vow!

Well done and take care,
AuntyNelly

P.s saw this piece in 'Lexi's Romance NL'
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Review Of "Fear and Tears" (nw) [Rated: E]
Date and Time: 07-21-07 @ 12:21am
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

A great writing. Thanks for sharing, I thoroughly enjoyed reading every word. You hit the proverbial nail on the head.
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Review Of "Did you?" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: MDuci~Supports ... (212) mduci
Date and Time: 01-02-06 @ 11:39pm

Did you know my first husband? the father of my three son's? I think you wrote this one for him. I so glad I stumbled by your port tonight. I knew I would find something that would make me tear. Thank you for sharing and please have a HAPPY NEW YEAR.
Your new fan. I'll be back to read more.
M Duci
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Review Of "The Minnie Carlyle Story" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Allarius (48) allarius
Date and Time: 08-15-02 @ 2:53pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

An interesting start and you have an easy to read style. I really liked the beginning and the style of it reminded me of some of the great classics. Keep writing.
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Review Of "The Window" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Sherri Gibson (497) sherrigibson
Date and Time: 07-22-06 @ 11:45pm

Tenth grade? This poem is a gem, The Absentminded Professor, and one you should be extremely proud of. Having written since I was in elementary school...third grade to be precise...I knew I would one day pursue my dream. I did, and am now a published author and poet. I wish you the best in all that you do!
a follower of my heart always,
sherri
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Review Of "The Window" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: bugzy thnx Ski... (59) bugzy
Date and Time: 03-22-07 @ 8:28am

This is perhaps one of the most powerful poems I have read to date. So much pain, and darkness. I cannot believe you wrote this in grade 10.... astounding
well done
judy
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Review Of "Love without expectation" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Dario Carlino (7) darioangel
Date and Time: 08-08-06 @ 11:19pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Love without expectations. Once more I am impressed by your connections. I truly admire the way you reach conclusions. In your words I can see your heart, it is nice and sweet, a heart that embraces hope and allow you to write about the easiest and hardest subjects of all, such as love. I like the fact you can see past the flesh, past the eyes, into the soul of humanity. You recognize the uniqueness behind it all, and that makes your writing more meaningful. In a culture where most people are worried about obtaining “pride”, I can see there are some doing the contrary, trying to be a bit more humble, and perhaps that is the way go. I trust the direction your writing takes and how it leads the reader by the hand, with clarity and sincereness as as a guide. The fact that you compare humans to animals brings to the light the truth about all of us. We can be the most beautiful or the most hideous creatures walking this earth, and it is all a matter of choice, the choice we can always make and always regret. As you said “The animal kingdom operates on the rules of self-preservation, of trying to obtain at all costs what is of personal benefit to them.”
Humanity can rise above egoism, and I believe your Essay does just that, it shows us the choices we have to do so. Great work.
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Review Of "Love without expectation" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: ChloeLane (1) chloevdlanena
Date and Time: 07-09-08 @ 1:20pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

WOW! I think every couple needs to read this. The emotion I felt was some laughter and some tears. At one point, I ducked my head in shame because I could pinpoint some of my areas that I personally need to work in. I have been married for 20 years and every once a while, a person needs to take a step back a readjust their thinking and actions toward the one they love. It's sad to write this, but it took me a long time to love. I cared about the man I married when we first married, and it took me a space to grow to love him. You see, I do not believe in love at first sight. I heard it exist, but I personally have never experience it.

My favorite part is the following:

True love is true recognition of the inherent good in human beings, generous forgiveness of their faults, and an appreciation of the fact that you are not the most important person on the planet. It is putting the person that you love above you, in the sense that you are willing to put their interests before your own, even at a significant disservice to yourself.

It took me a while to learn this when I first got married. I held grudges like you would not believe. It took reading a book titled "70X70". It's a rough book to get through. Forgiveness is something that all couples need to do unconditionally and willingly right off the bat. It soothes like an ointment. Plus, learning to put the person you love - above yourself is the key. My mother-in-law is a published writer and she wrote in my journal once - learn to laugh at each other. NEVER go to bed angry. She wrote of an incident between her and my father-in-law. They were arguing in bed - over something so ridiculous, but she was determined to get her point across. However, it never worked. She was so upset at him that she rolled over to ignore him - and beautifully kept going and fell off the bed. He rolled over and looked down at her and they both laughed till they cried.

Love, laughter, & forgiveness. All combinations that work together.

With your permission, I would love to put this link in my management links. That way, when my port is visit, this will catch their attention and generate readers to this essay.
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Review Of "To just be...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Blüeyez (41) blueyez
Date and Time: 11-27-07 @ 10:18pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Very nice! Oh to be such a talented writer at such a young age.
This makes one think... really think! I like that in a poem. It's almost as if I could fill in between the lines and create my own poem.
Sandy aka Blüeyez
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Review Of "Poems of affirmed love" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Kings (79) piewhackett1
Date and Time: 08-09-02 @ 4:39pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Excellent Sweetie;
If you don't mind will you tell me your age? The reason for this I like to know how or, what time you are in life.

I have really encouraged a lot of young writer as to their work. Are you a young writer?

Why did you ask me to review your work? Have you read my article on writing suggestions?

I am just curious or, did you pick me from random?
No matter this is a very good write I will check more of your port later o kay? Kings
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Review Of "Poems of nature" (nw) [Rated: E]

Review By: Kings (79) piewhackett1
Date and Time: 08-09-02 @ 9:38pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Loveliest maiden;
This is beautiful very well written. I liked it very much.

Don't you dare to stop writting that would be a sin on your part. With your talent you will certainly go some where in the literary world. Kings
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Review Of "The Story" (nw) [Rated: 13+]
Review By: Kings (79) piewhackett1
Date and Time: 12-06-05 @ 1:59pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Lovely One,
This is a beautiful story, my friend. Even though it is also very sad with the failure of a happy ending.

It is exstremely well written the characters and the subject were excellent.
I enjoyed the read as it kept me totaly enthused and impatient to read the rest as soon as possible.

You have certain qualities in your stories that only a few writers can accomplish as an author.
I certainly don't consider myself an expert on story writing, but your stories intrique me.

Thanks for the great read, my friend.
Kings (Carl)
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Review Of "The Story" (nw) [Rated: 13+]
Review By: GeminiStar (179) geministar
Date and Time: 04-11-06 @ 10:57am
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Thank you for posting a request in my review forum!

Overall impressions: This was a great story! Do you planning on adding to it. I think that this would work great as a continuing story.

Things I liked: I liked the plot, and the names and personalities of the characters.

Things I think should be cut: None.

Things that need rewording: None.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation suggestions: I didn't find any errors grammical mistakes. Good job!

Plot comments: Again you did a great job in this area!

Things I found confusing/questions: None.

Character comments: Again I love the names and personalities of the characters.

Visualization comments: You gave a great description and visual. You should think about publishing this as a short story or extending the story and making it into a novel or novella.

Title/Name comments: I like the name that you gave the story....very cute!


Gemini
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Review Of "The Story" (nw) [Rated: 13+]
Review By: Incurable Romantic (68) jwilliamson
Date and Time: 03-11-06 @ 6:33pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

THIS IS SPECTACULAR! I loved every word. It has a number of typos, but then it IS still a work in progress. THe key is it's a WONDERFUL work. I especially love what Elaine told Oskar's family when his mother accused her of killing him. AND the twist at the end with the marriage of Mr. Towson. PLEASE let me know as you refine this. IF YOU HAVE ANY DOUBTS ABOUT A REVISION TAKING AWAY ANY OF THE WONDERFUL QUALITY OF THIS TALE, let me see the revision first. I'll help all I can. This is one of the best stories I've read in a LONG time. Be careful not to lose any of its moods as you edit. All the emotions are strong, and well placed. Keep that.

Jim
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Review Of "The Story" (nw) [Rated: 13+]
Review By: Angela Thanks RAOK. (46) maryellen
Date and Time: 03-11-06 @ 7:21pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

What I read here is very well wrote and a great read and good twist on a story for any age I think. It gives a element od suspencve that is hard to find in a read such as this at times. I am so glad the story was brought to my attention to read. I have looked for a while for something to hold my interest as this does. Great Job. Angela Michelle Adams.
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Review Of "The Story" (nw) [Rated: 13+]

Review By: DragonMuse (41) rosalie
Date and Time: 07-20-06 @ 8:07pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Great story in the vein of the Bronte classics.
A terrific read.

There is a school of writers/literary critics who would note the action of 'eyes'. They get a little antsy when 'eyes' do things the are impossible. I have not been sure of what they mean, but I think these examples are what they are talking about. I think you can cast your gaze.. but not your eyes.. although you can have downcast eyes.. It's all very confusing. Your writing is terrific, and from these few examples I feel I have learnt something too.
I hope you don't mind me sharing this with you.
It's not WRONG.. As far as I know.. just that some overly critical publishers/editors get hot under the collar about it.
Thanks again. Great work.
Rose.

...then cast her deepened eyes again towards the solace of the tiny window
...let my eyes fall to the ground
... fired her doleful eyes toward me like two gunshots
...his brown eyes darted quickly around
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Review Of "The Story" (nw) [Rated: 13+]

Review By: loveshines (28) loveshines
Date and Time: 11-29-06 @ 1:12pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Oh my gosh. This is just so powerful. I have read many romance novels, and this is one rare one which made me wept buckets and buckets of tears. You really have an awesome way with words, just pulling at our heartstrings. I couldn't stop reading...and crying. Great job..it was really good.
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Review Of "The Story" (nw) [Rated: 13+]

Review By: Rachwrites82 (27) rachwrites82
Date and Time: 10-11-06 @ 7:59pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

This was great! I loved every sentence of it. It took me a while to read it all, but it compelled me to keep reading. The romance and love in this story is amazing! Elaine and Oskar are great caracters, I love the way the story is told. Great ending, Great begining, and a Heartbreakingly superb ending! Great Job!
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Review Of "The Story" (nw) [Rated: 13+]

Review By: violet princess */ (38) rfwentzel
Date and Time: 01-01-07 @ 2:25pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

What a well written story! It was extremely painful to read and I was practically crying at their fate, yet at the same time it was overwhelmingly beautiful. You have created a a cast of characters who, while they might not be the most lifelike, are nevertheless real and inspiring. Your style as well seems to have touches of an earlier era, though I can't put my finger on quite what. I also loved the passages about the mortal and the immortal soul. Thank you for sharing this tremendous story!
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Review Of "Can I fly?" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: MDuci~Supports ... (212) mduci
Date and Time: 01-11-06 @ 10:08pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Can I fly? This is my favorite question to myself. In many of my dreams, just before I wake I see me flying, and some day I'm sure I will not look back but continue the journey. Your bio spoke many things to me and I knew I would have to come into your portfolio to see how right or wrong I was. I must say I'm glad I did. I thank you for paying a visit to my port, and I plan to return to yours again and again. I have put you on the list of my favorite authors.
Sincerely
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Review Of "From Oskar to Julianna" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Annemarie-Inter... (23) iluvtoowrite
Date and Time: 06-27-07 @ 3:21pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Great letter! It really shows the love and passion betweeen the two of them. Oskar sounds so sweet. Hopefully Julianna still loves him back. No Julianna, you can't get married to Richard!

Sorry. But tell Julianna to get back together with Oskar for me.

Annemarie

Can't wait to read your book so far!
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Review Of "On being "fully present"...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Sherri Gibson (497) sherrigibson
Date and Time: 08-03-06 @ 12:05am
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

I couldn't agree more! Love's doorway should be open always, and a give and take sentiment. True and undying love is based on complete honesty and the sharing of hearts, taken for granted by so many, whether it be friend or man and woman. Loved this piece, simply loved it!!!
sherri
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Review Of "On being "fully present"...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Kings (79) piewhackett1
Date and Time: 03-03-06 @ 5:36am
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

I think this essay was witten very well my friend. You did a great thing by describing your beliefs and the reasons for you to have them.
I believe you wrote from your heart with your true feelings in mind.
Thank you for the nice read, I enjoyed it.
Kings (Carl)
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Review Of "On being "fully present"...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: girlwrites (16) girlwrites74
Date and Time: 01-07-06 @ 8:29pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Excellent! I really enjoyed this writing! The content was very interesting, easy to read and made me careful not to skip a beat!
Really pulled me in as a reader! I agree very much with all you had to say, and you said it all very well!
I have nothing to correct, it was really a 5 in my book!

Write on!
Girlwrites
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Review Of "On being "fully present"...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: bugzy thnx Ski... (59) bugzy
Date and Time: 03-21-07 @ 3:54pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Very well said. I think of this theme often, but your eloquence is heartfelt. Thank you for sharing your thoughts....it has made me think more.
bugzy
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Review Of "Tomorrow" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Kings (79) piewhackett1
Date and Time: 09-09-05 @ 9:57pm
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

I found your poem "Tomorrow" to be an excellent write, my friend.
Its flow was like a Rocky mountain stream cascading down into the foutain below.

The words you employed to write it were well chosen and painted a beautiful piture of poetry.

Thank you for the loving read.
Kings (Carl)
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Review Of "Tomorrow" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Harshal (6) harshalpotter2
Date and Time: 01-11-07 @ 12:07am

So lovely yet so sad...
True definition of eternal love...the last line really convey everything..
So romantic yet so peityful...
Thanks for the read...
Love Harshal
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Review Of "Feudalism in Japan and Europe" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: faintlymacabre (11) faintlymacabre
Date and Time: 05-04-06 @ 7:56am

Great report. It's well organized and informative. I knew most of the stuff about European fuedalism, but the information on Japanese fuedalism is all new.
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Review Of "The Journey -(a personal blog)" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Mark C ~ intern... (53) markone
Date and Time: 02-01-08 @ 6:04am
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Hi,

I haven't read all the entries in your blog yet, though, God willing, I hope to at some point. I've read enough to know I love it. You write clearly and have a real talent with words. You're not afraid to reflect on deep and difficult issues, and I like that a lot. The introduction to your blog is excellent and really prepares the reader for what's in store. I'm very much into life-long learning and deep reflection. I like your world view and find a lot in it that I agree with.

I'm also touched by your honesty and openness regarding how much you find life a struggle at times. I pray that many good times await you in the future.

Thank you for sharing your journey. I'm making this review public in the hope that others will wish to check out your blog - it certainly deserves a wide readership.

Very best wishes,
Mark
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Review Of "Love Quotes" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Brooke - *Smili... (96) b.meridith
Date and Time: 07-12-07 @ 2:47am
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

Congratulations on being featured in the Love/Romance Newsletter!

I LOVE this!!

It makes me happy just reading through it... I love quotes and I love the WritingML you've spread through this piece.

Great job!!


~ Brooke
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Review Of "The Fundamental Truth (an opinion poll)" (nw) [Rated: 13+]
Review By: Mark C ~ intern... (53) markone
Date and Time: 02-01-08 @ 6:14am
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

I took this poll a long time ago but forgot to rate and review it. Oops!

The scenario you set up here is really dark and depressing but it certainly sets up a real ethical dillema and makes the person answering the poll question what's truly important.

I answered in favour of keeping my principals. I believe that our personal integrity is the one thing that can't be forcefully taken from us. Our moral values and belief systems are a vital part of who we are as people.
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Review Of "The Fundamental Truth (an opinion poll)" (nw) [Rated: 13+]
Review By: Adam P. Rothstein (4) adamr69
Date and Time: 12-14-07 @ 12:22am
Reviewer's Rating: (5.0)

I think this is a fascinating subject for discussion. In fact, it is something I have thought about quite often...not necessarily in the exact way you presented it, but at times, I find myself question my personal code of ethics. I very much enjoyed this, and must say that it is a think piece in the highest sense.

The only thing I would look at is the last line of the second to last paragraph. I believe that should be "deceived BY you". Just something to think about...I'd hate for people to notice that and lose some of the over all power this very well could hold over them.

Excellently done, I give it a 5 out of 5 with nigh a doubt in sight!

Good luck and keep writing!

-adam
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Review Of "What I can't promise you...." (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: f-Lexi-bilty (165) lexijewlgia
Date and Time: 06-06-06 @ 12:01am
Reviewer's Rating: (4.5)

Absentminded Professor,
Oh, this is beautifully romantic! Your imagery is shown through these poetic vows.


I will be highlighting this in my next issue of the Romance Newsletter (June 6th-8th). I will be discussing how to rescue romance in life and stories. I think this will fit perfectly. Please keep your eyes out for the issue.
Write on!
~Lexi
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Review Of "The Minnie Carlyle Story" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: FantasyTeen (28) blubrds2
Date and Time: 10-06-05 @ 11:22am
Public/Private: Private
Reviewer's Rating: (4.5)
Review Length: 315 Characters
Review Follows: [Delete Review]

This is a great story. Keep up the good work. My favorite part is the way that you get into the different carachters heads and help the reader to understand backround information without making it boring. When you add on to this (there will be more right ! Let me know. I would love to read it.

FantasyTeen
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Review Of "The Elise Vanderbilt Story" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: karabu (47) karabu
Date and Time: 06-18-05 @ 11:46pm
Reviewer's Rating: (4.5)

Hi. I found your wonderfull story from the Sci-Fi forum, so I am going to try to answer the questions that you posted there.
First, overall, it struck me as very mysterious, kinda creepy in the beginning, then just more intriguing as it progressed.
Elise, again I first thought was just wierd, and creepy, and still like that later on, but less so. Dr. Wilde is less developed it seems to me, but overall he just a regular guy, trying to do his job. I think their interactons reviel more about her since she controlls the conversation for the most part, but she remains mysterious - and I love that!
The concepts are very interesting. The necklace seems so magical at first, that I have to say I was a little disapointed when it turned out that something as mundane as a micochip controlled it, but as the rest of the technology was introduced, it all fit so well together it didn't bother me anymore.
Scene setting is great, I had a perfect picture in my minds eye of the room and Elise, but not really of Dr Wilde. I almost felt cold at the beginning of the piece.
As for surprises, I was surprised bu almost all of the developments so far - whith my greatest shocks being when the necklace began to float, when Elise kisses the Dr., and when he wakes up at home with a piece of the necklace.
I was a little nervous tht I wouldn't have the painence to finish the whole thing at once when I saw the legenth, but once I started reading, I couldn't stop. I'm interested to see where you go from here, I'd love to read more. Thanks for the story!
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Review Of "Writing Quotes" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: Giggles-3 yrs at WDC (17) katy911
Date and Time: 07-24-06 @ 9:16pm
Reviewer's Rating: (4.5)

Very enjoyable quotes. I read, in the intro to your port, that you enjoy the Bronte sister's works. Me too. Charlotte once said “I'm just going to write because I cannot help it.” which is similar to other quotes you have but isn't it the truth!

Giggles
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Review Of "Love without expectation" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: spidey (122) spidergirl
Reviewer's Rating: (4.5)

Hi there The Absentminded Professor lovelyone

This is a wonderful essay!

I found this essay while searching for romance/love items. I wanted to let you know that I'm going to feature this in next week's Romance/Love Newsletter.

Thanks for sharing your opinion, and I like that you included a response at the end of the essay.

spidey
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Review Of "Love without expectation" (nw) [Rated: E]
Review By: brothafett (6) brothafett
Date and Time: 05-10-07 @ 8:31pm
Reviewer's Rating: (4.0)

this has to be the deepest essay so well thought out and contemplated on the subject of true love. It is tough to swallow at some points, but it makes a lot of sense. I'm glad to have found it and it truly gives me something to think about. Thank you
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Reviewed Item's Title: Poems of tragic love
Review By: Gypsy Mistress Celebrates 2
Review's Rating: 5.0

The poems you have collected in here are enough to make a person cry. Great job.
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Reviewed Item's Title: Tomorrow
Review By: LemonPie
Review's Rating: 5.0

That's very romantic, and I love how it's done in dialogue form. The old language is really nice, too. Great poem!!
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Reviewed Item's Title: I found true love...
Review By: Bobby
Review's Rating: 5.0

This is absolutely Beautiful. At first I though you had you a REAL LIVE GUY. Excellent writing. God Bless, Bobby
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Reviewed Item's Title: Oskar & Elaine
Review By: Elaine
Review's Rating: 4.0

This is a ripe story for one of those melodramatic mini-series. The end of the story got me. I had no idea she would commit suicide. You very cleverly led me through the story without revealing her definite intentions to "join Oskar". I could see this piece being presented by an Alfred Hitchcock show or the Outer Limits show. I saw a very adept aptitude for mystery, fantasy and sci-fi in your story. I think those areas are your forte'. Loveliest, thank you for an edge of my seat read. You are a deep person and your writing reflects a "still waters run deep" flavor. Thank your for allowing me to read your port. Take care and keep writing. Bye for now. Bless your heart, Elaine
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Reviewed Item's Title: Tomorrow
Review By: kings
Review's Rating: 5.0

Loveliest Maiden; This is a very well written piece of poetry. It has the Shakespearean effect I do like it. Are you in college, majoring in perhaps Literature? You are a very good writer Sweetie. Kings
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Reviewed Item's Title: Oskar & Elaine
Review By: Bobby
Review's Rating: 5.0

WOW !!!! You certainly have an eloquent way with words. Have you ever considered having this published?
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Reviewed Item's Title: Tomorrow
Review By: Kai - Willow
Review's Rating: 5.0

awww its a beautiful poem, sad in its way. You are truly a poet if I've ever seen one. You are on my short list of those who are incredible poets! ::hugs:: Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed Item's Title: The Window
Review By: Christoph the Poet
Review's Rating: 5.0
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Reviewed Item's Title: Anomaly
Review By: WRITEING
Review's Rating: 5.0

Well this is unsual like the title of this poem. This was published, And you don't like it. Well you should be proud of it. It is pretty kool. I don't what to say about it because it is like it's title, anomaly.
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Reviewed Item's Title: Life's Tragedy
Review By: WRITEING
Review's Rating: 5.0

Well it funny that you asked try to guess the meaning, well i don't have a clue. Maybe you can explain it to me. All i know you have your own style of writing, unlike other people on this site. I guess you can say you are a true poet. Yep, you are.
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Reviewed Item's Title: What I can't promise you...
Review By: WRITEING
Review's Rating: 5.0

sound like some guy telling his mate that he will stand by no matter what. But everyday will not be like peaches and cream. Exceptional piece of writing.
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Reviewed Item's Title: I miss you
Review By: WRITEING
Review's Rating: 5.0

Nice piece, sounds like some guy is off to war, and his lover is waiting for him to come back. May he come back in one piece. Excellent write.
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Reviewed Item's Title: Tomorrow
Review By: WRITEING
Review's Rating: 5.0

I see you really know how to write, and you have talent. A lot of it. The guy was just handing her a bunch of stuff she wanted to hear. So we will all wait with her and we we see what happens.
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Reviewed Item's Title: What I can't promise you...
Review By: ..::Eternal Dream::..
Review's Rating: 5.0

I love this! If you don't mind, I would like to put it in my item showcase. Please get back to me.
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Reviewed Item's Title: Tomorrow
Review By: Christoph the Poet
Review's Rating: 5.0

Wow, some people try to write Old English, but you can make it flow... great job!
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Reviewed Item's Title: Tomorrow
Review By: Anywhere|But|Here
Review's Rating: 5.0

a beautifully written piece. i love how you encorporated the seasons within the piece. the last line, wasnt as much of an ending as it was a kind of..."sequal soon to come" kind of thing. you kind of ask yourself, isnt she going to get over this guy? heh. but its really worked out. you have a nice original rhythm to your poetry that you showed at the beginning two stanzas. nice job.
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Reviewed Item's Title: What I can't promise you...
Review By: mott back 8-12
Review's Rating: 5.0

It speaks volumes in a very simple unspoken promise. There are many ways to say "I love you" and this one is unique yet strong.
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Reviewed Item's Title: Life's Tragedy
Review By: mott back 8-12
Review's Rating: 5.0

Liked the repititive first line and the way it made it seem so melodic. Excellent wordsmanship.
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Reviewed Item's Title: The Window
Review By: mott back 8-12
Review's Rating: 5.0

It is strong in imagery and foreboding...a kind of dark song-like quality. It's kind of an old theme, but presented well so it makes a good read for even me and I not a big fan of "dark/sad" work.
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Reviewed Item's Title: Anomaly
Review By: Marin
Review's Rating: 5.0

you are obviously a very talented writer! i haven't read "Nothing Like You", but this poem is really inspiring.
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Reviewed Item's Title: The Elise Vanderbilt Story
Review By: Marin
Review's Rating: 5.0

Wow! i was (am) very impressed by the way you wrote. you have a vivid vocabulary and are not afraid to use it! intriguing mystery as well.
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Reviewed Item's Title: I miss you
Review By: Emily
Review's Rating: 5.0

Wonderful poem! Beautifully expressed and well worded. You convey the feelings and emotions of lost love very well here. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed Item's Title: Tomorrow
Review By: Liquid Emotion
Review's Rating: 4.5

Oh, to wait forever for a love that never comes. . .how bitterly familiar. Very good writing.
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Reviewed Item's Title: I miss you
Review By: Aurora Knight
Review's Rating: 5.0

Very romantic poem? There is a certain quality about your poem that would fill people with longing and romantics want to swoon. It's beautifully written, luv.
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