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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Relationship >> ID #610095  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Rubbernecking
would you believe, a dodoitsu on impossible fascination?
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         Rubbernecking

Your mind a gyro dreamscape
Survives to escape, endure;
My thoughts and words coalesce
Not into detail.

How befuddled I must seem
Spending a daydream on you,
Praising your clouded wishes
When mine are grounded.

Crazily you twist and spin
Reveling in sin they say;
Helpless to you though I am
Nevertheless drawn.


[auth note: this poem is companion to a few written by former user haizey]
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