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Disneyland Dreams
Round 3 Entry for the April Anti-SLAM!
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Disneyland Dreams

A large mouse with a red bow tie
roams the City of the Angels
(or is it Angles?)
with his posse of
narcissistic fairy-tailed friends -

and a tree falls in the woods
         does it make a sound?

AudioAnimatronics™ on Electric Light Parade™
at The Happiest Place on Earth™ -
children do a riverdance of innocence
as Walt rolls in his cryonic suspended grave.

In Anaheim
the mouse yawns.

* * * * *

This is supposed to be a BAD poem, lol! Thus a ONE STAR rate is coveted!
Prompt - Twisted free verse, it must include a reference to a city and an anime or animal. Incongruency will score high!
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