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A subliminal feeling has washed over me.
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I've long sat here with my tears,
staving off a lonliness,
wondering if anyone would come near.

When he left me, I was daunted with the fear
of everlasting emptiness;
I've long sat here with my tears.

Then there was you, blue yet clear,
radiating happiness,
wondering if anyone would come near.

Silent I sat, dear,
noting your contentedness;
I've long sat here with my tears.

The crying stopped here,
and washed away was my lonliness,
wondering if anyone would come near.

Then I met you here,
and you granted me some happiness.
I've long sat here with my tears,
wondering if anyone would come near.
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