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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Young Adult >> ID #677194  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
shattered
an attempt at a poem....
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This item contains Edit Points (EPs). EPs are the red numbers (~#~) that you see within this item. The Author has placed these at various points in order to gain detailed feedback. Readers may click any EP to leave comments about that particular point in the item.

To think that I used to look up to you~0~
makes me laugh~1~
You had me fooled for so long~2~

I was a child, with out a care in the world~3~
You seemed so wonderful~4~
Mysterious and dark~5~
I was swept away~6~

Now I am grown~7~
not all the way but enough~8~
Your games don't affect me anymore~9~
Alas, I'm now able to beat you at this ~10~
pathatic little game

no longer am i a sweet daisy,
but i am now a blood red rose complete
with thorns
you don't have a hope

don't challange me
i have no choice but to win
i will not rest until you have
been stopped

you will not be allowed to hurt anymore children
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