Sign up now for a
Free Email Account &
your own Online
Writing Portfolio!
Username:
Password:  
Reviewer Items

More Reviewers  

Read a Newbie
Badges
Generosity
Presented To:
Thought Particle

Testimonials
Tell a Friend
Know someone who'd
like this page?

Email Address:

Optional Comment:

Who's Online?
Members: 298    
Guests: 1102    
   
Total Online Now: 1400    
Writing.Com Time

Thursday
May 31, 2012
8:46am EDT


  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Writing.Com >> ID #714530  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Invalid Item
This likes 1 star ratings (hint hint)
Rated:
E
by
Avg Rating: (26)
So I ramble, ramble
'long this dark black sea;
I don't know where I am
because I can't see.

The sea soon turns
from deep black to yellow.
And suddenly the mood goes
from sullen to mellow.

Still, things are way too
bright for me to see
even though nothing separates
you from me.

I guess I'll scroll along
and enjoy this crazy ride
because from nobody
am I able to hide.




© Copyright 2003 Elisa, Stik 15K (UN: soledad_moon at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Elisa, Stik 15K has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Log In To Leave Feedback
Username:
Password:
Not a Member?
Signup right now, for free!

All accounts include:
*Bullet* FREE Email @Writing.Com!
*Bullet* FREE Portfolio Services!