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MANNA OF LOVE—a ghazal
Come, today I so miss you, Come I so want to kiss you. My life is yet incomplete, For me, true, will be bliss you. I have waited far too long, Come to me please, come quick, you. I am living in this hope Pure love, mine, will not ditch, you. Balloon of my love, I hope, Never in life will prick, you. On cloud nine I soar in love, Hope, my wings, will not clip, you. Just like a counterfeit coin, Me, away, may not flip, you. You are like manna to me, Khalish, I want to sip you. * Written in aa, 7-7 format * A ghazal consists of couplets in which the last 1-3 words of both lines of the first couplet and each second line of the subsequent couplets are repeated as refrain [called radeef], while the word immediately preceding the refrain is a rhyming one and is called kaafia. For a detailed note on ghazal, please see: "WHAT IS A GHAZAL AND HOW TO WRITE IT?" "MY GHAZALS IN ENGLISH" Some of my ghazals are given below: "CALL OF THE HEART--a ghazal" "MEMORIES--a ghazal" "TRUE LOVE--a ghazal" "MANNA OF LOVE—a ghazal" "WARMTH OF LOVE—a ghazal" "LONELY LIFE—a ghazal" "GODLY BLISS--a ghazal" "CALL OF LOVE--a ghazal" "FORGET ME NOT" "ONE DAY—a ghazal " "FINAL GOOD BYE--a ghazal" MC Gupta 8 July 2003
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