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MANNA OF LOVE—a ghazal
The lover in waiting for long exhorts the beloved to come soon
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MANNA OF LOVE—a ghazal


Come, today I so miss you,
Come I so want to kiss you.

My life is yet incomplete,
For me, true, will be bliss you.

I have waited far too long,
Come to me please, come quick, you.

I am living in this hope
Pure love, mine, will not ditch, you.

Balloon of my love, I hope,
Never in life will prick, you.

On cloud nine I soar in love,
Hope, my wings, will not clip, you.

Just like a counterfeit coin,
Me, away, may not flip, you.

You are like manna to me,
Khalish, I want to sip you.


* Written in aa, 7-7 format

* A ghazal consists of couplets in which the last 1-3 words of both lines of the first couplet and each second line of the subsequent couplets are repeated as refrain [called radeef], while the word immediately preceding the refrain is a rhyming one and is called kaafia.
For a detailed note on ghazal, please see:
"WHAT IS A GHAZAL AND HOW TO WRITE IT?
"MY GHAZALS IN ENGLISH

Some of my ghazals are given below:

"CALL OF THE HEART--a ghazal
"MEMORIES--a ghazal
"TRUE LOVE--a ghazal
"MANNA OF LOVE—a ghazal
"WARMTH OF LOVE—a ghazal
"LONELY LIFE—a ghazal
"GODLY BLISS--a ghazal
"CALL OF LOVE--a ghazal
"FORGET ME NOT
"ONE DAY—a ghazal
"FINAL GOOD BYE--a ghazal

MC Gupta
8 July 2003

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