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Cloudy Vision
Intentionally bad sedoka about a pet gone wrong for Anti-Slam.
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Little golden fish.
Swimming in your filthy bowl.
Floating poo obscures your face.
You swim on your side.
Gasping, you search for fresh air.
The search is futile, you float.
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