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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #748637  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
When You Told Me You Loved Me
I wrote this poem to my husband when we were dating.
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When you told me you loved me,
My heart danced inside me.
My Januarys turned to June,
And birds sang on the rainiest days.
I saw strangers walking by and wondered:
         “Can they tell?”
I wanted to scream out to the world:
         “I’ve found the man of my dreams
         And HE LOVES ME!”
I went to bed and grinned into my pillow.
I couldn’t stop smiling.
All my days were brighter,
My senses awakened because:
You said you loved me.

Do you remember, my sweet?
The innocence of the first realization of love?
The electricity when our eyes met,
The…static…when our hands touched.
We said:
         “I want to be pure to protect your purity.”
And:
         “I would never do anything to hurt you.”

Since then, we’ve stumbled,
         And we’ve
                   -tripped- and we’ve
                             f l o u n d e r e d.
We’ve said things we didn’t mean,
We’ve done things we regret,
And sometimes I wonder if we were right…
But then you take my hands,
         Look in my eyes,
                   And tell me you love me.

And my heart dances.
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