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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #756635  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Our Last Hour
A short but, unique poem about breaking-up.
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When I sit alone at night,
Wishing you would hold me tight,
Whisper how much you really care,
A promise of the life we'll share.

And gaze at pictures of the past,
Making every moment last.
Remembering how our bodies touch,
Of how I love you so very much.

If it were within my power,
I would freeze our last hour.
Hold it in my hands for us to see,
Then place it in our hearts for eternity.

So if you feel that it must end,
Please think of me now and then.
And when life leaves you sad and dour,
Open your heart and thaw our last hour.
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