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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #775805  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
You Are My Love! (A Dodoitsu)
I wrote this for the Advanced Poetry Workshop. This form is called a "Dodoitsu".
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You are my *Heart*Love

Nish! truly have you loved me
Like a sunkissed flower does
love the hopping bumblebee ...
My wife! I love you!

© Dr. Taher


Author's Note:

The "Dodoitsu" is a four line Japanese poem that has love/romance as its theme. It has a total of 26 syllables, with 7 each in the first three lines and 5 in the last one.

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by Dr Taher Wishes Happy 2012!
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