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  >> Static Item >> Prose >> Psychology >> ID #799091  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Tornado
A new shape for my "Tornado Around Me"
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I was told my "Tornado Around Me would make a great Calligramme, or a poem in the shape of the subject, so I gave it a try. Hope it turns out okSmile




    The winds start low and build. They start
     to grow larger in my heart until it grows
      too large It explodes out of me and
       surrounds me completely.I sit in the
       middle of the tornado It's fierce
      winds swallow me up. I cry for
     help, for anyone to please come,
    Breach the walls, I hate being
     alone.The hurt is too great,
      The emotional pain too much.
       The storm fuels on the pain.
          I sit and accept I will be
            
alone again,Alone to
               battle the tornado.It
                swirls around my soul
               Tearing hunks of it
              away,My happiness, my
             joy, myself.The winds
            plummet me, The debris
          of life hit hard.I
          sit in the heart of
           the tornado Wishing…
            The howling grows,
              Please come sit
              with me, be with
               me, Don’t just
                sit outside.
                    Be strong
                      and fight
                      the walls
                    that I can
                    no longer
                       fight,
                     Come and
                   experience
                  the rage
                 of the
                hurt,
                 unlike
                   the
                  others.
                   Hold
                     me
and help me through my difficult times.Only with some help can the storm ease,Can the day break.Please help me tame the tornado around my soul.
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