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She Loved Me! The way Ma-ri-a loved me 'I want you for me,' told she; I think of her and I see her smiling, At me, her love to be. © Dr. Taher Kagalwala, 2004 1st Couplet: Line 1: 7 syllables, ######A Line 2: 7 syllables, ######A Line 3: 10 syllables, ######A plus 3 syllables ### called the "gair cyrch" Line 4: 6 syllables, #####A The letter A is the rhyme, while each # represents one syllable. In my construction, the orange coloured words represent the rhyme A, and the plum coloured words are the "gair cyrch".
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