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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #814044  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Life Without You
An old poem re-written for Angelterra's Valentine's Day competition
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Life Without you

Walking.
One of the first of a handful of things I did as an infant
To the amazement, pride and delight of my parents.
One foot in front of another,
Arms reaching out for the haven of father's embrace
I probably shrieked with innocent joy at my own accomplishment.
Walking.
Down your driveway, having collected my keys
I never felt as unsteady,
I feared the very ground beneath me would give way.
No safe haven, no loving embrace awaiting me,
Only the bleakest of prospects: a life without you.


Thank you to terrilee for the awardicon & for selecting this poem as the winner of the
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