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Spring's Playgrounds Sprung
Writing "The Naga Uta" for The Writer's Cramp! Whew!!!
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New Prompt: Write a poem, using "The Naga Uta" as your form,
about:
children playing on a playground in Spring,
or:
an artist, whom is painting on location.

5/7/5/7/5/7 rhyme scheme:

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ID: 583818
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Springs Playground Sprung

The children burst forth

Like flowers spring from the ground

Renewed adventure

Reveling on playground toys

Spinning and reeling

Merry-go-rounds riders’ spin

On the games of ole`

Shrill cries of joy revealing

Seasonal transplants

Their perennial nature

Small children playing

First buds of Spring displaying

Answers earths warming

With they’re annual swarming

Running and jumping

Teeter-totters, rise and fall

Earths bounty springs new

Balance natures sprouting joys

Smiling faces sprout

Brightly Colored pants and shirts

Scatter Springs playgrounds.

Children like wildflowers grow

Sun and shade abound

With seeds of springs mixed flowers.

Picking playground toys

Which to plant themselves upon

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