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Rain- A Triad for The Writer's Cramp
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The Writer's Cramp 
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A Triad as explained by bianaca

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Rain


For me, rain sets circumstance into commotion
Ever wet and never dry, which is how I prefer humor and wine
Rain wreaks havoc, even when it falls from a cloudless sky

My days and nights fill with dread as rain plops onto my head
Huge, soaking drops drizzle, making my hair frizzle
While I hunt for an umbrella, eager to provide myself some relief

Rain slick roads whose dust once lined streets like sheets of 18K glistening gold
Now a muddy slip and slide for the gaggles of auto tires, free spinning and reeling
My fate out of my control, I turn to sweet, cold, wet liquor during these blessed events

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