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Crying
A poem exemplifying my sadness, written in rhyming tetrameter couplets.
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The clouds float gently through the sky
As I lay down and start to cry.
This world is full of hate and pain
My tears flow swift and hard as rain.
My life feels like a giant shame,
I'm in an impossible game.
It's been ages since I've felt loved
And everyday I'm pushed and shoved.
Long ago my spirit was crushed
My hopes and dreams lie in the dust.
The clouds move ever ever on
As I keep crying until dawn.
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