Sign up now for a
Free Email Account &
your own Online
Writing Portfolio!
Username:
Password:  
Reviewer Items

More Reviewers  

Read a Newbie
Badges
Reviewing
Presented To:
Satuawany

Testimonials
Tell a Friend
Know someone who'd
like this page?

Email Address:

Optional Comment:

Who's Online?
Members: 503    
Guests: 735    

   
Total Online Now: 1238    
Writing.Com Time

Wednesday
May 30, 2012
8:49pm EDT


  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Arts >> ID #847370  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Senryu - Bad to the Bone Contest
Poetry written to rate a lowly "1", Bad to the Bone Poetry Contest entry
Rated:
ASR
by
Avg Rating: (11)
Written for
ID: 542364
Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
by Not Available.


Writing Olympic Decathlon Contest Entry:


Grilling Senryu – and it is not fish

Drips fall from the face
Summer days baste meat with sweat
Outdoor grilling lore

Hot vacation days
Bare flesh burns in summer sun
White ash coals spark flames

Sweat beads, drip, drop, plop
Off my nose into skillet
Fall sea salt flavor


Please know that I know that this is a really bad poem, so a rating of one star is actually considered to be a compliment.*Bigsmile* I thought if the poem was not bad enough that you could give me a one star rating for subject matter.*Laugh*



** #841973 Not An Image **
© Copyright 2004 The Critic (UN: thecritic at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
The Critic has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Log In To Leave Feedback
Username:
Password:
Not a Member?
Signup right now, for free!

All accounts include:
*Bullet* FREE Email @Writing.Com!
*Bullet* FREE Portfolio Services!