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Author's note
Haikus are an ancient Japanese verse form. They are three lines long and should follow a syllable pattern of 5,7,5. A haiku should be visual and about nature. It is considered pure to include a word-play or pun. They should not rhyme. The great Japanese master, Basho (1644-94), wrote in Japanese, so his haikus do not follow the rules when translated. He also shows us that a haiku does not always have to be visual or about nature. Here are two Basho Haikus. "Moon-daubed bush-clover- ssh, in next room snoring prostitutes." "Poet grieving over shivering monkey, what of this child cast out in autumn wind?" Now, here are some of mine: These follow the rules: At the water's edge tall amongst the grey green reeds the heron reflects. Fresh gourds and garlic chillis and coriander Heaven scent to Leeds. My husband wrote this, next one Cyclists calling out to warn walkers lost in dreams, win my no-bell prize. These break one or two rules: Crepescular views, laburnum and lilac hues yellowing the blues. She fought big business by reading library books. She showed them who's boss. (Written 27 May 2003) Gillete Series Gel, for clean skin, with tea tree oil. In two-hundred grams. This last one is a joke really. It was inspired by a can of shaving gel. I will add new Haikus as I write them.
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