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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Personal >> ID #872124  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Like a Dream
My imaginative portrait of the celestial light
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I saw you once.

Your hair wafted
To the sky,
Like tendrils of smoke
blending with clouds.

With eyes that glazed
Like windows,
I read your soul,
Momentarily,
And watched memories spill
Like milk.

You wore white silk—
A white that was like death, like life—
And the silky lace danced at your heels
Like water
That seeps between crevices
And cools the skin with its touch.

I felt the touch,
But water is deceitful.
It touches you,
But when you try to touch back
It pours through your fingers
Like a dream.
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