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 Bright Lights, Big Cities Rated:
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 A mother's lost.
by: purplelove3121 View jo2005's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: jo2005 [Offline / Private] Avg Rating: (1)  

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Bright Lights, Big Cities, Lost Dreams~0~

Bright lights, big cities hush little boy ~1~
your mama's gonna get you.~2~ "What are you standing on that corner for?" "Did you loose something there?" "Did I place something on that corner for you?" No, no, no so then let's go.~3~ "We've got hopes and dreams and matters to tend to and we sure can't relize them if you're standing on that corner and hanging with that crowd." And Oh, my!~4~ where'd you get those clothes from?~5~ "Why are you dressing like that?" "It looks so strange." Bright lights, big cities, lost dreams.~6~


Bright lights big cities hush little boy your mama's gonna get you.~7~ "It's time to go to school.~8~ Now, where are you?" This house feels so empty without you.~9~ "Oh, I know where you are.~10~
Hanging with that crowd again." "Where'd you get that car from." I wish your sister was here maybe she could talk some sense into you.~11~ "Oh, no, not the gold chain." "I'm loosing you." It hurts so bad.~12~ How can I win you back?~13~ "Will a smile do?" Money?~14~

"Oh, I know I'll show you love and understanding in spite of my disapproval of what ~15~
you're doing.~16~ I'll shower you with love.~17~ I'll treat you as though our relationship has not changed." ~18~

"Court!~19~ What'd mean court?~20~ You've got to go to court.~21~ My world, my life ended that day.~22~ How could someone as precious as you be going to court for something like that.~23~ Oh, well I'll be there for you, at every court appearance you have to make and besides I heard that judges are more symphathetic when rendering decisions to persons under the age of eighteen when the ~24~
parent(s) shows support.~25~ Bright lights, big ~26~
cities hush little boy your mama's gonna get~27~
you.

It's cold outside.~28~ Winter has set in.~29~ Snow's all around.~30~ Bright lights, big cities hush little boy your mama's gonna get you.~31~ Bright lights, big cities, lost dreams.~32~



By JO LYLES~33~



















































































































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